This week we were given pictures of different chocolate wrappers and were told to incorporate them into a fun story. This is what i came up with enjoy!
Hi Eleanor, are you ready to get back to school and your friends already? This is a great wee story, almost makes me want to meet this nerd Buzz :). His evil friend Pinky reminds me of an old cartoon from TV called Pinky and the Brain who were two little mice wanting to take over the world. Have a great week Eleanor. Miss J
Hi Eleanor it's Ashley from T3. This is a great post you really got me hooked on the story and i like how you didn't say what happend to buzz and it makes me want to come back and see the part two if there is one. I think maybe next time you could add in one more character who maybe gets stuck in the middle of all of it but apart from that it was really good kai pa keep up the good work
Kia ora Eleanor What a fun learning task. I am thinking I need to create one for someone I know who has a special birthday soon but it will take me a long while to check out the sweets aisle at the supermarket and I can't be in there too long in lockdown! I am thinking it must have taken a long time to plan the story out.
Hi Eleanor Its Latoia from t2 I really like how you have made this slideshow of a sweet. I like how you have used the chocolate bars to describe the story and not only that it is fun for someone to read it and be like this is something i might want to try. Hope you have a great day. Latoia
Hi Eleanor I really enjoyed reading about your sweet story story! Its really cool how you have used the chocolate bars to describe things! Cant wait to see what happens next Ka pai -Madison
Hi Eleanor, are you ready to get back to school and your friends already?
ReplyDeleteThis is a great wee story, almost makes me want to meet this nerd Buzz :). His evil friend Pinky reminds me of an old cartoon from TV called Pinky and the Brain who were two little mice wanting to take over the world. Have a great week Eleanor. Miss J
Hi Eleanor it's Ashley from T3. This is a great post you really got me hooked on the story and i like how you didn't say what happend to buzz and it makes me want to come back and see the part two if there is one.
ReplyDeleteI think maybe next time you could add in one more character who maybe gets stuck in the middle of all of it but apart from that it was really good
kai pa keep up the good work
I meant Ka pai
ReplyDeleteKia ora Eleanor
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun learning task. I am thinking I need to create one for someone I know who has a special birthday soon but it will take me a long while to check out the sweets aisle at the supermarket and I can't be in there too long in lockdown! I am thinking it must have taken a long time to plan the story out.
Hi Eleanor it's Hazel in T2 I love your sweet story i like it when you said what will happen to buzz.What is going to happen to buzz next? from Hazel.
ReplyDeleteHi Eleanor Its Latoia from t2 I really like how you have made this slideshow of a sweet. I like how you have used the chocolate bars to describe the story and not only that it is fun for someone to read it and be like this is something i might want to try. Hope you have a great day.
ReplyDeleteLatoia
Hi Eleanor
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading about your sweet story story!
Its really cool how you have used the chocolate bars to describe things!
Cant wait to see what happens next
Ka pai
-Madison