Friday, July 30, 2021

A storm in the city

 Storm in the city


This week for my paragraph i had to write it on the title a storm in the city it was really hard to know where to start but i think i did a good clean paragraph. Enjoy

1 comment:

  1. Hi Eleanor
    I think that you have written this really well!
    I really enjoyed reading this!
    How long did it take you to write this?

    Madison

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.